tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-200721485261992830.post2210849065301515530..comments2023-10-17T07:00:42.718-03:00Comments on Love YA: Pitch Wars 2015 Mentor Bios and Wish List! :)Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00482654021641010175noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-200721485261992830.post-82736911017878596382015-08-13T19:21:20.626-03:002015-08-13T19:21:20.626-03:00Like Paranormalcy? It sounds nice, but if it's...Like Paranormalcy? It sounds nice, but if it's like that, then I don't think I'm the right mentor for that project. Good luck finding one, though! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00482654021641010175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-200721485261992830.post-75027966116032017092015-08-13T18:36:09.294-03:002015-08-13T18:36:09.294-03:00Totally understandable. The MC is a different supe...Totally understandable. The MC is a different supernatural being and her purpose/duty is to eliminate rogue creatures/beasts throughout the human world. If that helps at all. :DMaxymhttp://maxymmagazine.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-200721485261992830.post-40871100328498367332015-08-13T14:25:51.884-03:002015-08-13T14:25:51.884-03:00Hey! It really doesn't matter to me. I've ...Hey! It really doesn't matter to me. I've read a lot of books with British English spelling. Maybe later, if we pick you, considering most of the agents (if not all?) are American, it might be a good idea to change that. But don't change if for my sake! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00482654021641010175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-200721485261992830.post-74086617878393672362015-08-13T14:23:32.133-03:002015-08-13T14:23:32.133-03:00Hi! Good question. It's hard to tell just like...Hi! Good question. It's hard to tell just like that, because not having read the query, I'm wondering why do you have vampires in a chapter. Like why are they even important in the plot. I would say I might not be the best mentor for it, but if I really like the voice and characters and writing I may do an exception there. But I would extra nitpicky. I'm not sure what Susan would say--guess we'll have to wait till she sees your question on her blog. :) Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00482654021641010175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-200721485261992830.post-36169806986273771972015-08-13T12:42:45.685-03:002015-08-13T12:42:45.685-03:00Hi - I'm English therefore I realise I'll ...Hi - I'm English therefore I realise I'll be spelling British English as opposed to American - does this matter to you? Should I try and change it?<br />Thanks<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13295394271921687456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-200721485261992830.post-61414101100103051182015-08-13T11:52:07.244-03:002015-08-13T11:52:07.244-03:00Hi there!
I posted this on Susan's blog as wel...Hi there!<br />I posted this on Susan's blog as well, but I figured I should fill you in too. :D I was wondering, how do you feel about vampires who exist in the story for no more than a chapter, only to be killed? They are in no way, shape or form the center focus of the novel, but are a problem that gets eliminated toward the end.<br />Thanks!Maxymhttp://maxymmagazine.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-200721485261992830.post-46607511504989221732015-08-03T07:40:38.674-03:002015-08-03T07:40:38.674-03:00Good luck polishing that MS! :) Good luck polishing that MS! :) Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00482654021641010175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-200721485261992830.post-12491206341486622102015-08-01T14:30:46.753-03:002015-08-01T14:30:46.753-03:00First, this sounds like so much fun. Wait, I meant...First, this sounds like so much fun. Wait, I meant work as promised. Second, what a great description of genres with book examples. Hurray, more for my reading list! Third, I'd better get back to my edits. Off to polish my WIP.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03683787289610071946noreply@blogger.com