Finvarra's
Circus is coming to town, and seventeen-year-old Leanna is determined to see
it. Everyone knows once
the circus leaves, the fairest girl in town is found dead, deformed, and
heartless. Rumors say it’s the handsome ringmaster, Finvarra,
who steals their beauty and their hearts, but this means little to Leanna. Her heart is
damaged and failing her. Surely he won't want it. She sneaks into the circus,
but caught by Finvarra, he gives her a choice: become their tightrope walker or
die.
Leanna
accepts, and now a part of their strange family, she learns that Finvarra never
meant to harm her. He needs her to stay. An ancient curse binds the troupe to
their circus. They must perform forever or perish. To break the curse, Finvarra
must die, and only the famed muse, the Leanan Sidhe, can kill him.
Finvarra
believes he’s found his muse in Leanna, and Leanna can’t deny the growing
attraction between them. But not everyone wants freedom for the circus and
they’ll kill any girl suspected of being Finvarra’s inspiration.
With
her life and the circus’s on the line, can Leanna sacrifice her love to free
the troupe? Will her feelings for Finvarra be their demise? Or will her
heart fail her when she needs it the most?
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Leanna Weston looked at the newspaper on
her lap and cursed her broken heart. Gracing the headlines in bold text were
the words of her lifelong dream, a dream her damaged heart made impossible.
“Finvarra’s Circus, coming to Winter
Abbey,” she whispered, trailing a finger along the vine-like symbols bordering
the header. A sad smile curled her lips as her hand danced over the printed
images of clowns and lions. Each gentle stroke unfurled memories in her mind of
her mother’s stories, tales of dancers performing fluidly atop white unicorns
and fire breathers riding chariots pulled by centaurs while they battled one
another’s fire dragons.
“Don’t even think of it, child,” her
nurse said, pouring Leanna a glass of water. She set it at the night table and
took the paper from Leanna’s lap. “Your heart is much too weak for a journey to
Grover’s Field, much less in this cold.” She gazed out the arched windows, to
the gilded leaves brushing past in a gust of autumn wind. “This winter will be
a vicious one, I tell you.”
Leanna ignored this. Though the
newspaper was gone from her hands, she held fast to her memories and to the
crystal necklace that dangled around her neck. “If opening night is in a week
and their show so grand, they should be here by now.” She looked out over the
tree tops. No tent peaks marked the landscape, but she sighed wistfully at the
thought of them there.
I *love* how lyrical this is. Absolutely stunning! Good luck! :D
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Wow what a beautiful story!!!
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I'm totally sold. I love the circus and this feels like an entirely new take on the idea! Would read it all right now!
ReplyDeleteThis sounds great!!! Kind of like THE NIGHT CIRCUS meets HOWL'S MOVING CASTLE. I'm definitely cheering for this one!
ReplyDeleteThis sounds amazing. I love the voice that's present in your query and your first 250. Rock on!! Good luck!
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ReplyDeleteLOVE. Want to read more!
I absolutely love the query and 250! :)
ReplyDeleteThis really does sound wonderful. I can't wait for it to be snatched up so I can read it soon! I love the idea of the circus and that the protagonist has a weak heart.
ReplyDeleteYour first page is so lovely! I dig the HOWL'S MOVING CASTLE-like element here, and I'm such a huge fan of anything circusy. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteI've been looking for a circus story, so I'd love to see this. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteSarah
This looks really fun! I'd be glad to see it.
ReplyDelete-Mollie
I'd love to see this. It sounds great!
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ReplyDeleteMonika
I was hooked by this from the moment I started reading it! I would love to request the full manuscript. From, Your Friendly Neighborhood Ninja
ReplyDeleteThis sounds so amazing!! I would love to request the full manuscript. From, Your Friendly Neighborhood Ninja
ReplyDeleteYou've been ninja'd! I would love to see a pitch, one-page synopsis, and the first fifty pages. Please send it as a word attachment to...(contact Monica/Brenda for further details!). Looking forward to reading your work :)
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KAPOW!! Ninja Agent here. I'd love to read the full!
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So. A not-so-secret ninja agent requested this one by email!
ReplyDeleteIt's...
*drum roll*
The lovely Laura Bradford!!
YAY!!