THE KEEPERS
YA fantasy
55,000 words
QUERY
Isra Kalb might be only sixteen and
left to her own devices in a filthy slum in Pakistan. But her existence holds the
key to saving the world from potential destruction.
Recently orphaned, Isra is left with
a sister to care for and only a precious family heirloom to remember her
parents by. It’s an amulet that just so happens to transport its keeper to Zarcane—
the beastly garden where Adam and Eve were born. Since the first man and woman,
a girl and a boy must guard the Amulet. And as the Keepers, they need to find each
other and, together, return the amulet to Zarcane. Otherwise the beastly garden’s
queen will lead her army to Earth, pillaging the lives of millions, to
strengthen her power.
But when Isra learns the other
Keeper’s identity—Farid—she realizes her mission is
nothing short of doomed. Farid, bitter from a past affair that his mother had
with Isra’s father, has no intention of helping. And there’s no way Isra can
seal the cracks between Zarcane and Earth without her counterpart.
If Isra fails, she will be the first female Keeper to betray the ancestral
duty. Winged creatures with teeth like nails would be unleashed to Earth, and
she would be the one to blame—responsible for every life taken.
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The
hunger cramps continued to gnaw at my empty stomach. They crept into the hollow
insides of my body, silent and sly, snatching the sleep I never seemed to get
enough of. I had fooled the yearning for a while by wrapping a cloth tight
around my torso. I almost convinced myself that I wasn’t hungry. Almost.
Now, enraged at the deception, the hunger was back with a vengeance. It was useless
to try and go back to sleep. I had worn out my welcome in the dreamers’ lands.
I
glanced at the silhouette of my sister, who was lying beside me. The blanket
had slipped off her skinny body and now lay in an untidy heap on the floor. I
picked it up and gently pulled it over her cold shoulders. She rolled, spinning
a cocoon in its wool, and sighed happily. I felt my lips part in a smile that
echoed her short-lived contentment.
Sparing
a final glance at my sister, I crept out of the room. The door wailed behind
me, its rusted hinges creaking. I hoped silently that it hadn’t woken my sister
and began walking along the dirt road. I moved past rows of corrugated iron and
wooden shacks, toward the only well in our slum. Maybe I could fill my stomach with water instead. I
had done it before on far more than one occasion.
I
looked back. From a distance, my home looked like a human bird’s nest, but I
loved it as it was. The crumbling infrastructure was the framework of my life.
I'm so excited about this concept and, especially, the setting! Absolutely wonderful! Good luck :D
ReplyDeleteThis is definitely my cup of tea - would read this in a heart beat. Sounds awesome! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful imagery and interesting take on the Garden of Eden/ origin of man story! Can't wait to see what happens!!!
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This sounds amazing.
ReplyDeleteI would read this in a heart beat. Has an almost 'Narnian' Feel to it
Love this...the imagery and concept are spectacular!!!
ReplyDeletei love the description and imagery and the story line sounds enchanting, great work .. good luck :)
ReplyDeletelove this story idea... I would defiantly buy this as a book.
ReplyDeleteYou've been ninja'd! I would love to see a pitch, one-page synopsis, and the first fifty pages. Please send it as a word attachment to...(contact Monica/Brenda for further details!). Looking forward to reading your work :)
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