GARDEN OF THORNS
YA Fantasy
90,000
QUERY
Kidnapped from a life of royalty as a child, seventeen-year-old
Rose knows how fragile life as a dancing Flower can be. Forced into the Garden,
a burlesque troupe of slave girls, she has learned to see dangers everywhere
when a wrong word could mean losing your tongue—or worse.
When the Garden is invited to perform for the king and her slave
master kills a fellow dancer as a show of power, Rose decides she must escape.
Her plan is simple: grab a hostage and run like hell. What she didn't count on
was her hostage revealing himself as the leader of the rebellion, and she
definitely never dreamed she’d end up joining the uprising. But with the
kingdom stamping out the rebels and her former slave master threatening to
murder a dancer a day until she returns, Rose quickly realizes that nowhere is
safe-- especially since she’s the unwilling heir to the neighboring throne.
Caught between staying with her newfound family in the rebellion
or rescuing her sisters from the Garden, Rose must decide whether taking back
her birthright is a crown of petals or a crown of thorns. Only then will she be
able to rescue the other Flowers she abandoned, unite the war-torn kingdom and
maybe even save herself.
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My shackles are lined with needle-thin spikes that bite into my wrists and
ankles. Blood has crusted in between my fingers and toes but my chapped skin
stopped throbbing sometime last night. I learned that the less I move, the less
they dig. Stillness comes with its own set of pains, though. Stiffness has
crept up my back, growing up my bones like branches.
My
carriage, cage really, jolts to a stop and I fly off the splintered bench,
landing hard on my hands and knees in the straw lining the floor. Inching up
until I'm sitting, I look up at the wooden roof. A crack of light spills into
the cart, its weak rays like gentle fingers on my face. It gives the illusion
of hope. I turn away from the sun before that seed takes root in my chest and
grows.
Sounds rise up from the crack in my wooden cage: men shouting orders, wood
banging against wood as the cart doors are thrown back, and the shrill sound of
giggling. A second later, something heavy hits my door. I crawl toward the
crack on the left side of my cart and peer out.
Our line of caravans always attracts gawkers during our
parade through town. Women grab tighter to their husband’s hands, men pretend
not to stare, and children weave in between each cart and horse. Today, five
little boys, all knobby knees and boney arms, have followed us and circled
around my cart, throwing rocks.
I love how you make beauty sound cruel. This sounds like a magnificent read! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteYes!!!!! Love this story - query + 250 are superb. Can't wait to read this in the near future when you get snatched up! Good luck!
ReplyDeletelove Love LOVE! So much tension! The last paragraph of your query is AMAZING! I can't wait to see all the requests pour in :)
ReplyDeleteCan I just say I really love the title of this book and I feel like its perfect for the amazing story you plan to tell/are telling. When can I see this in shelves?
ReplyDeleteAdore this concept!! And her shackles, with the needles...omg!! Want this!!
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ReplyDeleteI'm a huge fantasy fan. I'd love to see this!
ReplyDeleteThis one has my vote.
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One vote from this gal!
ReplyDeleteI'd love to see this!
ReplyDeleteYou've been ninja'd! I would love to see a pitch, one-page synopsis, and the first fifty pages. Please send it as a word attachment to...(contact Monica/Brenda for further details!). Looking forward to reading your work :)
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