GEEK CAMP
Upper middle grade mystery
53,000 words
QUERY:
Thirteen-year-old Jared lives for video games, so he’s
pumped for the chance to design his own at summer camp. When star-teen
programmer, Brent Kagon, shows up too, Jared figures he’ll learn exactly what
he needs to top the iTunes Apps chart. After all, Brent may be just Jared’s
age, but he’s already made it big.
But Brent is too busy finishing his latest killer app
to waste time with “noob” programmers. Noob? Jared’s determined
to show his idol he has skill by making his app the Best. Game. Ever. But his
plans crash when he finds Brent unconscious, slumped on his MacBook. Brent’s
game code is missing!
Chaos
descends as cops and the media arrive, then levels up as accusations fly. Everyone’s
freaking — Brent because the thief stole his best ideas, the camp director
because Brent’s threatening to sue, and Jared because his name’s at the top of
Brent’s suspect list. Things can’t get any worse. But then Jared’s
mystery-loving twin sister, Maxine, gets her “Nancy Drew” look. The last thing
Jared wants is his flirty sister’s “help” solving a high-tech mystery. Jared
needs Aaron, his best friend and gaming bud, to help find the real thief and
clear his name. Maxine’s “help” is more likely to scramble Aaron’s brain and
leave Jared headed to juvie.
FIRST PAGE:
I’ve
been to plenty of summer camps, but the steep, winding drive to this one made
me twitchy. Tree limbs blocked the sun, creating a gloomy twilight that made me
think of Frodo leaving The Shire. Like Frodo, I was beginning a dangerous quest
into hostile territory: a week at Geek Camp. I peered out the window into the
creepy forest, not sure what I might find. A shiver ran up my spine.
The bus bumped over a last
pot-hole and broke into a clearing at the top of the mountain. It stopped in
front of a white building surrounded on three sides by trees – Hartland
Mountain Academy. Geek Camp was run by this private school for math and science
nerds. This place didn’t do swimming,
hiking and crafts. Smart kids came here to learn about robotics, rocketry or
the animal life of the forest. Or, like me, to design video games.
My best friend and gaming
bud, Aaron, elbowed me. “Dude, this is your
best idea ever,” he said with a smirk.
Right. Right. Best idea
ever. I couldn’t back out now.
But the thought of
spending a week surrounded by brainiacs made my hands clammy. I had no clue
what geniuses talked about. Maybe they never watched anything but Discovery
Channel shows. Maybe they wouldn’t waste time
playing any game but chess. I wondered if I could hang with a bunch of geniuses
without feeling like an idiot.
Ooh I used to love mystery novels like this when I was a kid! This one sounds like so much fun, and it's great that you use current technology like game apps as part of the story! Good luck, GEEK CAMP!
ReplyDeleteso much voice in your first page. this sounds like a really fun story! :) best of luck, fingers crossed!!
ReplyDeleteI vote for you - this sounds like a lot of fun!
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