SUN AND IRON
YA Fantasy
73,000 words
YA Fantasy
73,000 words
QUERY:
Seventeen-year-old Aelia
remains hidden deep in the forest protecting the only remaining Soul Tree. When
the tree grows strong, the magic inside it will help Aelia free her enslaved
people. But when a misstep leads to her capture and she’s dragged into a
Roman-like gladiator school, it seems the hope for Aelia’s kind is lost.
Eighteen-year-old gladiator
Zenon has thirteen more battles before he can finally claim his freedom. Then
his master sets him up to fight chained together with Aelia. She’s
unpredictable and weak, and Zenon can’t imagine a worse partner. But even
though Aelia refuses to kill her own people and stands in his way toward
liberty, Zenon finds himself falling for her.
Trapped between the will to survive
and the duty to help her kind, Aelia sees only one way to escape: start a slave
uprising. But when Zenon finds out about her plan, he’s determined to do
anything to stop it and save the many lives a rebellion would cost. If Aelia
can get out, she still has a chance of using the tree’s magic. If she can’t, getting
killed by her own kind would seem like salvation compared to what the masters
have in store for her.
FIRST PAGE:
Sweaty hands
catch my wrist, holding me back from getting lost in the crowd. I turn to glare
at the merchant and purse my lips to stop them from trembling. This is exactly
why I should avoid markets. But damn, I couldn’t resist the sight of so many
unattended coin pouches hanging on the shoppers’ belts.
The man’s raspy voice makes me jump. “What’s the hurry, girl?”
I shoot one last longing look at the trees—safety had been just a few
steps away. Pulling the hood of my cape lower over my face, I turn back toward
the merchant. He smiles, revealing yellow teeth in a perfectly pale face, but
his meaty fingers squeeze me tight. I toy with the idea of kicking him and
making a run for it, but I can’t draw more attention to myself.
A girl stands behind him with
chains on her neck and wrists. Her copper skin—identical to mine—is stained
with sweat and dirt. One look at her reminds me why I have to hide day after
day. With my free hand, I touch my cheeks to check the state of my disguise. I
painted any visible skin white, but with the sun burning through my dark cape,
I can only pray I didn’t sweat it off.
“Please let me go, sir. My mother is sick. She needs her medicine.” I
lie in a small voice trying to look as desperate as I feel.
I hold up the small bag containing
the harvest of today’s pickpocket spree and hope for both our sakes that he
doesn’t insist on opening it.
I love your concept! Best of luck in the agent round! Go Team For the Win!
ReplyDeleteHugs,
Rebecca
I love feisty Aelia! Best of luck to you!
ReplyDeleteThis is such a strong opening! It pulls me right into the story every time. Good luck, SUN & IRON!
ReplyDeleteI vote for you
ReplyDeleteNinja Agent strikes! I vote for this.
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