NAME:
Kati Bartkowski and Heidi Lang
MENTOR:
Elizabeth Briggs and Elizabeth Prats
TITLE:
Mystic Cooking
GENRE:
YA fantasy
WORD
COUNT: 90,000 words
PITCH:
16-year-old Lailu just wants to open a restaurant specializing
in
cooking mystical beasts, but after reneging on a loan shark, she’ll
need
her handsome rival’s help to escape the stew she’s in.
Lailu
scowled at the row of onions pinned to her far wall, her
calloused
fingers idly flipping a large chef's knife end over end
before
she turned to look at her remaining batch of onions. "Don't
worry,"
she told them quietly, "it will only hurt a second." As she
selected
a sweet yellow one, the bell above her front door chimed.
Lailu
whipped around, the onion toppling to the floor in her haste.
“Welcome
to Mystic Cooking,” she began eagerly, straightening her
fluffy
white chef’s hat. “Our special today
is…” Her eyes flickered
to
the man looming in her doorway.
"Oh." Lailu’s heart plummeted back
to
her toes. "It's you."
For
all she was barely over five feet tall, Mr. Boss (call me
“Victor”)
was not much taller, but his back was straight, and his cane
seemed
more like a threatening prop than a tool.
He looked like he
might
be in his sixties or seventies, his long gray hair streaked
through
with white and oiled back into a ponytail at the nape of his
neck. She'd heard the rumors, of course, that he
was actually two
hundred
and six, and that he bathed in the blood of young dragons
every
month to slow his aging. Lailu wasn’t
sure she bought that; she
knew
how hard it was to kill a dragon.
Mr.
Boss glanced at the line of onions pinned to the wall, then
turned,
taking in the spotless and very empty dining room. “Busy, I
see.”
Heidi & Kati, I can't believe you two didn't get any requests. This story will get published and I will help in whatever way I can. This is a light hearted and charming story that many readers will eat with a spoon. ;) Keep fighting.
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