MENTOR:
Lori M Lee
TITLE:
Those Who Can't Speak
GENRE:
YA Urban Fantasy
WORD
COUNT: 81 000
PITCH:
Cadence battles to keep her city safe from the Saints and Prophets imprisoned
there. When one prisoner finds an escape, she must stop him before he kills her
loved ones to make it happen.
Sebastian
said he found me in a hole, and I imagined it quite similar to the one I now
dangled in head-first. He didn’t want to tell me what kind of hole, but I
suspected it was the kind that was dark and damp. The kind of place mothers
threw unwanted babies and left them to die.
Just
after one a.m. I found myself hanging upside down in such a hole. Sebastian had
sent me there after he received an anonymous call that something had been
dumped inside it. More like sent me to do his dirty work, the lazy slob. I
wondered why he would send me out in the middle of the night when he nagged
about safety and whatnot so often.
I’d
decided to crawl into the hole instead of taking the rungs hammered into the
cold concrete. I liked keeping life interesting, my current position testament
to that. Right now, the only thing keeping me from falling into the black abyss
was my mute best friend, Zadie.
“Can
you hand me a flashlight? I think I see something,” I called to her.
“If
I hand you the flashlight, I’ll have to let go of one of your legs and you’ll
plummet to your death.”
After
years of hearing Zadie speak when she was supposed to be mute I didn’t find it
strange anymore. She was mute, to everybody except Sebastian and me. She had
some kind of psychological block we didn’t talk about, one of our many unspoken
Best Friend Rules.
Jani, your sample writing is awesome, like you. Just dropped by to show my support. Keep fighting.
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