Wednesday, January 23, 2013

Alt M-4



NAME: Tiffany Turpin Johnson
MENTOR: Sharon Johnston
TITLE: The Phoenix
GENRE: Speculative YA thriller
WORD COUNT: 74,000

Pitch

Resurrection’s illegal, but somehow Brie wakes to a dead boy at her window. Her ex-bestie Evan died eighteen months ago but now he's back, and all he knows is someone's out to kill him. Again.

First 250

There's a dead boy at my window.
I slide out of bed and squint in the darkness to be sure my eyes aren’t playing tricks. I recognize the dead boy right away, and he’s at the wrong window.
My ex-best friend Evan huddles on the porch, clinging with both hands to my window frame in the moonlight. A year and a half ago we sprinkled his ashes (so we thought) behind the Coral Beach High School football field. His parents said some nice things, and a lot of kids cried. The principal even shut down school for a few days. Seemed like an overreaction to me, but when the most popular guy in school disappears and turns up dead, overreaction is status quo.
Yet somehow here he is, staring at me with eyes wide and bloodshot and definitely alive. His hair is all gone, his skin so sickly pale it glows silver in the moonlight, and there's a huge, jagged scar running across his skull. Beneath the flimsy hospital gown his body is shrunken, concave. Not at all the cocky quarterback I remember. Despite all that, I'm sure it's him.
"Brie," Evan says, voice muffled through the glass, "are you in there?"
I blink a few times, so hard that blue spots swirl on the backs of my eyelids. This can’t be happening. I must be hallucinating again.

2 comments:

  1. Would love to read 3 chapters. Please send it to me in a word doc with the pitch/query letter in the body of the email AND as page 1 of the manuscript. Email: louise@lperkinsagency.com
    Thanks!

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  2. I'd love to read more of this. Could you send the query + full to Spencerhillrequests@gmail.com

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